Hard to see on the black background.
Hard to see on the black background.
Yeah it can be an issue with my color pic, could've done a slightly lighter grey. On my computer screen it's pretty visible but I do have my contrasts slightly off I think >w>
The disjointed shoulder is freaky. I love this overall art style, tho.
Thank you, now I can't unsee it lol. Appreciate the critique tho-
Layers of awesomeness!
Thank you!!
Gorgeous. Original character? Fan art?
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She looks good, tho!
Thank you brother. 🙏
Nice sprite animations, especially the bottom two. The ear movements are a great detail for the character overall. Suggestion: Use more of the darker orange on the edges, like on the shoulders, and to shade the legs consistently. Because of the amount of details on the arms, neck, and head, the bright uniform feels a little off. The animation for taking damage might benefit the most from toning down the lighter orange with more of the darker orange so the yellow blast stands out.
Hey man thanks for the info! I'll make sure to use what you say for the next time I do this, which is pretty soon.
Delightful. I mean, if your avatar is portraying delight, that's extremely subtle; but I'm feeling it!
Awwww...
I really felt your comment. Thank you very much.
I appreciate it :'D
Direct link to the reference: https://imgur.com/injdfAJ (stripped of the DeviantArt diversion)
Thank you! I've fixed the link. Sorry for the DeviantArt redirect link.
Lovely. The kiss is landing well, the expressions are sweet, and and the little squish of the front face is nicely done. I love the colors, too; the way blues alternate with the dark gray/browns is engaging. | Might help to tag this as "my-candy-love" and "fan-art". I had to look it up to know what "MCL" is, and fans won't be able to find this illustration in a search without tags.
Thank you so much! I haven't really thought of these details to be honest, but I'm happy you noticed! haha
I will be more carefull with the tags next time c:
I like the character drawings. I dislike how they're mismatched with the title, which looks like a scan of a metallic book cover or card that could look cleaner with a digital redraw.
This is helpful, thanks! :)
I remember life in the '80s and '90s. It wasn't simpler times. Anyhow, I'm now mostly doing pixel art and illustrations. My goal for 2025 is to create a fantasy visual novel for ages 17+ (or only for me depending how the real world goes).
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