Is anyone here interested in critiquing the extended demo of "Spirit of the Camp?
I'm looking for responses to the story, project descriptions, the GUI, and/or the sprites. You can choose what feedback to supply. (No AI use, only personal opinions.)
A list of questions can be supplied if you prefer structure.
Word count for the extended demo: about 9k words. Storyline choices aren't included at this time.
I guess the easiest method if you're seeing this message is to put it up in the Game Portal. Your critique could affect the narrative fantasy game before it's updated on Itch.io.
Familiarity with Southern US or East Coast entertainment history, 19th Century military history, and/or Victorian literature preferred for checking the story details and general style but none of that is required.
Reminder: "Camp" is queer and flirty. If you have a general problem with that, then your feedback won't be useful.
(But please tell me if you dislike the characterizations by the end of playing!)
Preferred turnaround: by the end of the week. I understand if that's not doable.
Link to the short demo for the project description:
