shadowfals's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Improvement from 2020 to 2021]

Lovely. Your coloring is well done.

[Midday meeting]

The hands are amazing!

[Commission: Annamalee]

Lovely colors. Gorgeous curves. The shiny details are very appealing.

For me, the duck in the cage is less appealing. Just seems out of place. The bird is simultaneously the focal point of the image and partially hidden by the bright bars. I don't understand why. I'm not sure what's happening in this image.

But I'm guessing it's significant to the client, whose opinion is the one that really matters.

The stained glass background blends too well with the goth character, in my opinion, but it is very pretty, too.

smashbrethren responds:

Thanks for the compliments. I'll have to keep in mind the level of contrast between the background elements and the main figure next time.

As for the posing and goose, they were pretty much specified exactly by the client. The only thing I had much artistic liberty with was the design of the outfit.

[Realistic cherry blossom]

Can you share your reference(s)? The silhouette is obviously a plant and has a tree shape. (Good job!) But the cherry blossoms look unrealistic to me. I might be unfamiliar with the type you're drawing.

[Mateja's coming out - Page 4]

The page isn't loading for me fully. :( It stops at the top of the fourth and fifth panels.

(The mid score, if you can see it, is only because I'm waiting for the full page and need to select something to post.)