shadowfals's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[One more night]

I'm frontpaging this for Takeover Tuesday because it's cool.

[Forever Sophie Chapter 5 Part 1]

Haha. A literal cliffhanger.

Daysdove responds:

Haha, I didn't notice until you mentioned it, I guess this is as good a hook as any. Glad you enjoyed it :D

[For Love and Wealth - pg 1]

Lovely colors. Effective paneling. There's a setting, character, and action with emotion. My only complaint: The text is difficult to read on mobile.

DiabloAfterDark responds:

Thanks. I'll try to make the text more readable in the upcoming pages. ^^

[Pride Month Collab Entry (2025)]

The small and pale face disappears into the bold pattern of the wide head, which is a little disorienting. Other than that, this drawing is cute! I especially like the rainbow shoe laces.

SpeedWaveX responds:

Thank you for your feedback!! :D I'll keep that in mind when i try making more art with them!!

Maybe I'll cut back a bit on making their head and face patterns being that wide.

[Pride Collab 2025 feat. Dictar]

I've no idea why this is scoring so low. Your chatacter looks great. Flowing flags are especially difficult to draw (I've learned this month), but the wrinkles in Dictar's grip came out well.

[the easter bunny's gift]

That bunny is adorable, OMG. The basket is beautifully made, too, except I feel the shading needs deepened on the bottom left to make it clearly behind the rabbit. The eggs on the left side of the basket are a little wonky; changing fewer than ten pixels total would fix those up prettily.

[Lucifero]

Gorgeous. I like how the mood is subtly from the original. A suggestion— there's a part of the wing on the far left side that looks as if a section was moved then partially worked over; lining that part of the wing up would perfect the painting.

[Angels]

Beautiful designs. I love the clever wings especially.

[Pride Flags]

Flags: trans, bi, LBGTQ+/GLBT/gay, ace, intersex (top left), genderqueer (top right), pan, lesbian, nonbinary, and (I had to look it up) poly. Free Whakistan!

ChazDude responds:

I'm booking your flight right now.